doc: fix correct use of Clear Linux OS

Proper use of the Clear Linux name is with a noun, specifically "OS".
Also fixed some grammar edits along the way.

Signed-off-by: David B. Kinder <david.b.kinder@intel.com>
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David B. Kinder
2019-01-30 15:05:21 -08:00
committed by David Kinder
parent fc887eade4
commit 0881bae738
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@@ -20,9 +20,9 @@ Prerequisites
*************
In this tutorial two Linux privileged VMs are started by the ACRN hypervisor.
To set up the Linux root filesystems for each VM, follow the Clear Linux
To set up the Linux root filesystems for each VM, follow the Clear Linux OS
`bare metal installation guide <https://clearlinux.org/documentation/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install#bare-metal-install>`_
to install Clear Linux on a **SATA disk** and a **USB flash disk** prior the setup,
to install Clear Linux OS on a **SATA disk** and a **USB flash disk** prior the setup,
as the two privileged VMs will mount the root filesystems via the SATA controller
and the USB controller respectively.
@@ -73,12 +73,12 @@ Build kernel and modules for partition mode UOS
.. code-block:: none
# Mount the Clear Linux root filesystem on the SATA disk
# Mount the Clear Linux OS root filesystem on the SATA disk
$ sudo mount /dev/sda3 /mnt
$ sudo cp -r <kernel-modules-folder-built-in-step1>/lib/modules/* /mnt/lib/modules
$ sudo umount /mnt
# Mount the Clear Linux root filesystem on the USB flash disk
# Mount the Clear Linux OS root filesystem on the USB flash disk
$ sudo mount /dev/sdb3 /mnt
$ sudo cp -r <path-to-kernel-module-folder-built-in-step1>/lib/modules/* /mnt/lib/modules
$ sudo umount /mnt
@@ -257,7 +257,7 @@ Enable partition mode in ACRN hypervisor
#. Optionally, configure the ``.bootargs`` kernel command line arguments
The kernel command line arguments used to boot the privileged VMs are
hardcoded as ``/dev/sda3`` to meet the Clear Linux automatic installation.
hardcoded as ``/dev/sda3`` to meet the Clear Linux OS automatic installation.
In case you plan to use your customized root
filesystem, you may optionally edit the ``root=`` parameter specified
in the ``.bootargs`` field of the ``.vm_desc_array`` structure, to