From 765e40bdb1cb0fb254449051e53520b655b8740b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "David B. Kinder" Date: Thu, 7 May 2020 09:28:51 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] doc: edit notes on serial connection need Clarify wording on tutorial notes about needing a serial port connection. Signed-off-by: David B. Kinder --- doc/tutorials/using_celadon_as_uos.rst | 12 +++++++----- doc/tutorials/using_zephyr_as_uos.rst | 5 +++-- 2 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/tutorials/using_celadon_as_uos.rst b/doc/tutorials/using_celadon_as_uos.rst index c661623c3..9808d7056 100644 --- a/doc/tutorials/using_celadon_as_uos.rst +++ b/doc/tutorials/using_celadon_as_uos.rst @@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ Prerequisites to identify the USB 3.0 port header on the main board. .. note:: - This document uses the SDC scenario (default). You may need a serial port connection to your platform - or change the configuration of the User VM that will run Celadon to see its console if you use a different - scenario. + This document uses the (default) SDC scenario. If you use a different + scenario, to see its console, you will need a serial port connection to your platform + or change the configuration of the User VM that will run Celadon. Build Celadon from source ************************* @@ -36,8 +36,10 @@ Build Celadon from source `_ guide to set up the Celadon project source code. - .. note:: The master branch is based on the Google Android 10 pre-Production Early Release. - Use the following command to specify a stable Celadon branch based on the Google Android 9 source code in order to apply those patches in the :ref:`ACRN patch list`:: + .. note:: The master branch is based on the Google Android 10 + pre-Production Early Release. Use the following command to specify a + stable Celadon branch based on the Google Android 9 source code in order + to apply those patches in the :ref:`ACRN patch list`:: $ repo init -u https://github.com/projectceladon/manifest.git -b celadon/p/mr0/master -m stable-build/ww201925_H.xml diff --git a/doc/tutorials/using_zephyr_as_uos.rst b/doc/tutorials/using_zephyr_as_uos.rst index 0df254dc4..14a299e75 100644 --- a/doc/tutorials/using_zephyr_as_uos.rst +++ b/doc/tutorials/using_zephyr_as_uos.rst @@ -8,8 +8,9 @@ Kaby Lake-based NUC (model NUC7i5DNHE) in this tutorial. Other :ref:`ACRN supported platforms ` should work as well. .. note:: - A serial port connection to your platform is needed to see the Zephyr output - if you use a different scenario than SDC (the default in this document). + This tutorial uses the (default) SDC scenario. If you use a different + scenario, you will need a serial port connection to your platform to see + Zephyr console output. Introduction to Zephyr **********************