doc: general edit for typos

Fix typos and misspellings, and tweak CSS for spacing before lists.

Signed-off-by: David B. Kinder <david.b.kinder@intel.com>
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David B. Kinder
2018-03-13 11:59:40 -07:00
committed by Jack Ren
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@@ -5,9 +5,9 @@ Getting Started Guide
After reading the :ref:`introduction`, use this guide to get started
using ACRN in a reference setup. We'll show how to set up your
development and target hardware, and then how to boot up of the ACRN
development and target hardware, and then how to boot up the ACRN
hypervisor and the `Clear Linux`_ Service OS and Guest OS on the Intel
|reg| NUC, using the UEFI BIOS.
|reg| NUC.
.. _Clear Linux: https://clearlinux.org
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ Hardware setup
The Intel |reg| NUC (NUC6CAYH) is the supported reference target
platform for ACRN work, as described in :ref:`hardware`, and is the only
platform tested with these setup instructions.
platform currently tested with these setup instructions.
The recommended NUC hardware configuration is:
@@ -40,9 +40,11 @@ for downloading and flashing an updated BIOS for the NUC.
Set up a Clear Linux Operating System
=====================================
Currently, an installable version of ARCN does not exist. Therefore, we
need to setup a base Clear Linux OS to bootstrap ACRN.
**ACRN requires Clear Linux version 21260 or newer.**
Currently, an installable version of ARCN does not exist. Therefore, you
need to setup a base Clear Linux OS to bootstrap ACRN on the NUC. You'll
need a network connection for your NUC to complete this setup.
.. note:: ACRN requires Clear Linux version 21260 or newer.
1. Follow this `Clear Linux installation guide
<https://clearlinux.org/documentation/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install>`__
@@ -71,11 +73,11 @@ need to setup a base Clear Linux OS to bootstrap ACRN.
| /dev/sda3 | 111.3G | Linux root (x86-64) |
+-------------+----------+-----------------------+
4. After installation is complete, boot into Clear Linux and log in as
root and set a password.
4. After installation is complete, boot into Clear Linux, login as
root, and set a password.
5. Clear Linux is set to automatically update. If you do not wish for
autoupdate, issue this command:
5. Clear Linux is set to automatically update itself. If you do not want
it to autoupdate, issue this command:
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@@ -110,7 +112,7 @@ need to setup a base Clear Linux OS to bootstrap ACRN.
Add the ACRN hypervisor to the EFI Partition
============================================
In order to boot the ACRN SOS on the NUC, we need to add it to the EFI
In order to boot the ACRN SOS on the NUC, you'll need to add it to the EFI
partition. Follow these steps:
#. Mount the EFI partition and verify you have the following files:
@@ -210,8 +212,9 @@ folder) as shown here:
:caption: acrn-devicemodel/samples/bridge.sh
:language: bash
By default, it is located in the ``/usr/share/acrn/demo/``
directory. Use it directly by making it executable and running it:
By default, the script is located in the ``/usr/share/acrn/demo/``
directory. Use it directly by making it executable and run it to create
a network bridge:
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@@ -256,8 +259,9 @@ Set up Reference UOS
:caption: acrn-devicemodel/samples/launch_uos.sh
:language: bash
By default, it is located in the ``/usr/share/acrn/demo/``
directory. Use it directly by making it executable and running it:
By default, the script is located in the ``/usr/share/acrn/demo/``
directory. Use it directly by making it executable and run it to
launch the User OS:
.. code-block:: none
@@ -266,7 +270,7 @@ Set up Reference UOS
# ./launch_uos.sh
#. At this point, you've successfully booted the ACRN system,
hypervisor, SOS and UOS:
hypervisor, SOS, and UOS:
.. figure:: images/gsg-successful-boot.png
:align: center
@@ -277,7 +281,7 @@ Build ACRN from Source
**********************
If you would like to build ACRN hypervisor and device model from source,
follow these steps:
follow these steps, using your NUC as a development system:
#. On your Clear Linux system, install the os-clr-on-clr bundle to get
the necessary tools.