doc: Spelling and grammar tweaks

Did a partial run of ACRN documents through Acrolinx to catch additional
spelling and grammar fixes missed during regular reviews.

Signed-off-by: David B. Kinder <david.b.kinder@intel.com>
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David B. Kinder
2020-09-25 16:24:35 -07:00
committed by David Kinder
parent d54347a054
commit dd0fe54141
58 changed files with 363 additions and 337 deletions

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@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ distribution.
.. note::
ACRN uses ``menuconfig``, a python3 text-based user interface (TUI)
for configuring hypervisor options and using python's ``kconfiglib``
for configuring hypervisor options and using Python's ``kconfiglib``
library.
Install the necessary tools for the following systems:

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@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ Hardware Connection
Connect the WHL Maxtang with the appropriate external devices.
#. Connect the WHL Maxtang board to a monitor via an HDMI cable.
#. Connect the mouse, keyboard, ethernet cable, and power supply cable to
#. Connect the mouse, keyboard, Ethernet cable, and power supply cable to
the WHL Maxtang board.
#. Insert the Ubuntu 18.04 USB boot disk into the USB port.
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ Install Ubuntu on the SATA disk
#. Insert the Ubuntu USB boot disk into the WHL Maxtang machine.
#. Power on the machine, then press F11 to select the USB disk as the boot
device. Select **UEFI: SanDisk** to boot using **UEFI**. Note that the
label depends on the brand/make of the USB stick.
label depends on the brand/make of the USB drive.
#. Install the Ubuntu OS.
#. Select **Something else** to create the partition.
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ Install Ubuntu on the SATA disk
#. Complete the Ubuntu installation on ``/dev/sda``.
This Ubuntu installation will be modified later (see `Build and Install the RT kernel for the Ubuntu User VM`_)
to turn it into a Real-Time User VM (RTVM).
to turn it into a real-time User VM (RTVM).
Install the Ubuntu Service VM on the NVMe disk
==============================================
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ Install Ubuntu on the NVMe disk
#. Insert the Ubuntu USB boot disk into the WHL Maxtang machine.
#. Power on the machine, then press F11 to select the USB disk as the boot
device. Select **UEFI: SanDisk** to boot using **UEFI**. Note that the
label depends on the brand/make of the USB stick.
label depends on the brand/make of the USB drive.
#. Install the Ubuntu OS.
#. Select **Something else** to create the partition.
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ Install Ubuntu on the NVMe disk
#. Complete the Ubuntu installation and reboot the system.
.. note:: Set **acrn** as the username for the Ubuntu Service VM.
.. note:: Set ``acrn`` as the username for the Ubuntu Service VM.
Build and Install ACRN on Ubuntu
@@ -287,7 +287,7 @@ BIOS settings of GVT-d for WaaG
-------------------------------
.. note::
Skip this step if you are using a Kaby Lake (KBL) NUC.
Skip this step if you are using a Kaby Lake (KBL) Intel NUC.
Go to **Chipset** -> **System Agent (SA) Configuration** -> **Graphics
Configuration** and make the following settings:
@@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ Recommended BIOS settings for RTVM
.. csv-table::
:widths: 15, 30, 10
"Hyper-Threading", "Intel Advanced Menu -> CPU Configuration", "Disabled"
"Hyper-threading", "Intel Advanced Menu -> CPU Configuration", "Disabled"
"Intel VMX", "Intel Advanced Menu -> CPU Configuration", "Enable"
"Speed Step", "Intel Advanced Menu -> Power & Performance -> CPU - Power Management Control", "Disabled"
"Speed Shift", "Intel Advanced Menu -> Power & Performance -> CPU - Power Management Control", "Disabled"
@@ -458,7 +458,7 @@ Recommended BIOS settings for RTVM
"Delay Enable DMI ASPM", "Intel Advanced Menu -> PCH-IO Configuration -> PCI Express Configuration", "Disabled"
"DMI Link ASPM", "Intel Advanced Menu -> PCH-IO Configuration -> PCI Express Configuration", "Disabled"
"Aggressive LPM Support", "Intel Advanced Menu -> PCH-IO Configuration -> SATA And RST Configuration", "Disabled"
"USB Periodic Smi", "Intel Advanced Menu -> LEGACY USB Configuration", "Disabled"
"USB Periodic SMI", "Intel Advanced Menu -> LEGACY USB Configuration", "Disabled"
"ACPI S3 Support", "Intel Advanced Menu -> ACPI Settings", "Disabled"
"Native ASPM", "Intel Advanced Menu -> ACPI Settings", "Disabled"
@@ -522,13 +522,13 @@ this, follow the below steps to allocate all housekeeping tasks to core 0:
# Move all rcu tasks to core 0.
for i in `pgrep rcu`; do taskset -pc 0 $i; done
# Change realtime attribute of all rcu tasks to SCHED_OTHER and priority 0
# Change real-time attribute of all rcu tasks to SCHED_OTHER and priority 0
for i in `pgrep rcu`; do chrt -v -o -p 0 $i; done
# Change realtime attribute of all tasks on core 1 to SCHED_OTHER and priority 0
# Change real-time attribute of all tasks on core 1 to SCHED_OTHER and priority 0
for i in `pgrep /1`; do chrt -v -o -p 0 $i; done
# Change realtime attribute of all tasks to SCHED_OTHER and priority 0
# Change real-time attribute of all tasks to SCHED_OTHER and priority 0
for i in `ps -A -o pid`; do chrt -v -o -p 0 $i; done
echo disabling timer migration
@@ -668,7 +668,8 @@ Passthrough a hard disk to RTVM
--ovmf /usr/share/acrn/bios/OVMF.fd \
hard_rtvm
#. Upon deployment completion, launch the RTVM directly onto your WHL NUC:
#. Upon deployment completion, launch the RTVM directly onto your WHL
Intel NUC:
.. code-block:: none