docs: apiserver-watch: minor cleanups

Reading through this doc I found a few grammar things to fix.
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## Abstract
In the current system, all watch requests send to apiserver are in general
redirected to etcd. This means that for every watch request to apiserver,
apiserver opens a watch on etcd.
In the current system, most watch requests sent to apiserver are redirected to
etcd. This means that for every watch request the apiserver opens a watch on
etcd.
The purpose of the proposal is to improve the overall performance of the system
by solving the following problems:
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1. Since we want the watch in apiserver to be optional for different resource
types, this needs to be self-contained and hidden behind a well defined API.
This should be a layer very close to etcd - in particular all registries:
"pkg/registry/generic/etcd" should be build on top of it.
"pkg/registry/generic/etcd" should be built on top of it.
We will solve it by turning tools.EtcdHelper by extracting its interface
and treating this interface as this API - the whole watch mechanisms in
apiserver will be hidden behind that interface.