diff --git a/examples/rethinkdb/README.md b/examples/rethinkdb/README.md index 2efec300bec..f65953159b4 100644 --- a/examples/rethinkdb/README.md +++ b/examples/rethinkdb/README.md @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ Quick start **Step 1** -Rethinkdb will discover peer using endpoints provided by kubernetes service, +Rethinkdb will discover its peer using endpoints provided by kubernetes service, so first create a service so the following pod can query its endpoint ```sh @@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ rethinkdb-driver db=influxdb db=rethinkdb 10.0.27.114 28015/TCP **Step 2** -start fist server in cluster +start the first server in the cluster ```sh $kubectl create -f examples/rethinkdb/rc.yaml @@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ rethinkdb-rc-r4tb0 1/1 Running 0 Scale ----- -You can scale up you cluster using `kubectl scale`, and new pod will join to exsits cluster automatically, for example +You can scale up your cluster using `kubectl scale`. The new pod will join to the existing cluster automatically, for example ```sh @@ -124,13 +124,13 @@ rethinkdb-admin db=influxdb db=rethinkdb,role=admin 10.0.131.19 8080 rethinkdb-driver db=influxdb db=rethinkdb 10.0.27.114 28015/TCP ``` -We request for an external load balancer in the [admin-service.yaml](admin-service.yaml) file: +We request an external load balancer in the [admin-service.yaml](admin-service.yaml) file: ``` type: LoadBalancer ``` -The external load balancer allows us to access the service from outside via an external IP, which is 104.197.19.120 in this case. +The external load balancer allows us to access the service from outside the firewall via an external IP, 104.197.19.120 in this case. Note that you may need to create a firewall rule to allow the traffic, assuming you are using Google Compute Engine: